Hi Lachie. I like your blog post because it looks like you really want to complete your goal and your goal ladder is really cool. This reminded me of my goal that I had in Tui which was not to sit next to friends. Next time you could maybe add a color in the background. Apart from that, your blog posts are really cool.
Kia ora Lachie. I like your blog post because it is a goal that lots of people should have. Personally I think this is a goal I should have as well because I also talk to my friends during writing, I also think you should add more colour in to the background so it is more eye catching. Overall I think this is a great goal and hope you achieve it.
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Hi Lachie. I like your blog post because it looks like you really want to complete your goal and your goal ladder is really cool. This reminded me of my goal that I had in Tui which was not to sit next to friends. Next time you could maybe add a color in the background. Apart from that, your blog posts are really cool.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Lachie. I like your blog post because it is a goal that lots of people should have. Personally I think this is a goal I should have as well because I also talk to my friends during writing, I also think you should add more colour in to the background so it is more eye catching. Overall I think this is a great goal and hope you achieve it.
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